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[jebbypal]

Meme gakked from inlovewithnight:

So, my challenge to you is, pick any fic I've written and comment here with something you don't like about it. Even if you have to grasp at straws because you worship the ground I walk on, say something mean about my fic. ("I don't like your use of the word "the." "Your sentences are too long." "You have no grasp of basic math." "The Earth isn't flat, you moron." etc. etc. You get the idea.)

Keep in mind that calling me a fat, lazy, no-talent hack does NOT count as fic criticism. Unless, of course, it comes immediately after "You spelled 'cat' wrong, dude."

Okay, I love all the shiny happy good positive feedback I get from folks, but I really would like to know if y'all think that there is something I continue to do wrong or not (other than the obvious of not finishing my WIPs faster that is). My work and links to it are found http://intheblack.geministar.org/. And I apologize in advance if some of the formatting is off --- that is my fault not cassiee.

In other news, not going to work today since I had a bad nosebleed right after waking up. Never a good idea to go outside in the cold after that if I don't want to be holding a kleenex after two blocks. Sigh, I know it's just getting close to that time of the month but I really wish that I could find something to do so that nosebleeds didn't come in tandem with it. Ah well, at least it clots faster now taht I'm not taking too many anti-coagulants like I was last year during my bayer asprin induced pains:)

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[shetiger.livejournal.com]

Hey. I've been meaning to get around to this. I just wanted to point out in The Heart of the Dilemna you switch tenses several times in the story. I'm not sure if you did it on purpose, but it always throws me off when that happens in a story.

Now let's hope we get some fun feedback soon. ;)

[jebbypal]

LOL...ummm yeah, I've noticed that:) Sadly, didn't get to give neroli much of a chance to hunt for those since I was under time deadline for serenity santa....and then didn't notice them till I reread part of it. Not my best work but am glad it turned out readable considering a) from jayne's POV and b) involved a large amount of kaylee. Still have trouble w/ those two especially together within a story.

And thanks for the reminder to watch my tenses. I know I'm bad at that sometimes. :)