LOL...ummm yeah, I've noticed that:) Sadly, didn't get to give neroli much of a chance to hunt for those since I was under time deadline for serenity santa....and then didn't notice them till I reread part of it. Not my best work but am glad it turned out readable considering a) from jayne's POV and b) involved a large amount of kaylee. Still have trouble w/ those two especially together within a story.
And thanks for the reminder to watch my tenses. I know I'm bad at that sometimes. :)
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Date: 2005-01-28 06:17 pm (UTC)And thanks for the reminder to watch my tenses. I know I'm bad at that sometimes. :)