Thankies....I tried to reply to the one person that managed to review before the outage and couldn't either.
And it is hopefully about halfway done not including a HUGE edit. Started to get a complex partway through about relying on dialogue too much. And then about rendering Zoe's dialogue believable. Sigh. hopefully that's just River being antsy about not getting enough scenes.
you had to turn me onto crack van didn't you? And right during their crossover collision. If I don't make it to work tomorrow, I will be blaming you *grin*
Ah, poor Stace...I gave up on checking lj after about noon yesterday until I got your email post. But I was still too unstable to post then so I went to bed...and got up and started a vid...bad me!
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Date: 2005-01-15 07:53 pm (UTC)*does the happy dance*
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Date: 2005-01-15 08:59 pm (UTC)Oh wow. Just got a chance to read this, and it gave me cold chills the whole way through. Literally.
I think you did a great job with Zoe here. And it's a very plausible look at what happened to bring her into the war. Brr.
Makes me want to read more. :)
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Date: 2005-01-15 09:01 pm (UTC)And it is hopefully about halfway done not including a HUGE edit. Started to get a complex partway through about relying on dialogue too much. And then about rendering Zoe's dialogue believable. Sigh. hopefully that's just River being antsy about not getting enough scenes.
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Date: 2005-01-15 10:51 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-01-15 11:04 pm (UTC)Mine is an evil laugh.
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Date: 2005-01-16 12:10 pm (UTC)