I echo LD's sentiments that there needs to be more, lots, LOTS more!
“Dean – keep Sammy in sight.” Dean huffed, but didn’t argue, earning a hand that messed his hair from John when they got out of the car. The kid was slowly developing instincts about his surroundings.
This part is my favourite! I like how you write John, and I would enjoy reading more about how he sees life on the road with the young boys, and how he reads Sarah and John Connor.
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Date: 2008-05-16 06:38 pm (UTC)“Dean – keep Sammy in sight.” Dean huffed, but didn’t argue, earning a hand that messed his hair from John when they got out of the car. The kid was slowly developing instincts about his surroundings.
This part is my favourite! I like how you write John, and I would enjoy reading more about how he sees life on the road with the young boys, and how he reads Sarah and John Connor.