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jebbypalOkay...been a while since I've read over anything I hadn't previously edited several times as well as had betaed at least once. Must get my use of adverbs under control. I can deal w/ the passive voice, but do I really need to use an adverb per sentence?? *bad muse, bad*
Got to the part where I've got to start writing again. Glad I didn't just throw most or all of it away as it really does have a lot of good places.....including my first ever good rendition of Kaylee. Imagine that. Who knows..might be able to work in that scene w/ jayne yet....
Ooookay...too much sugar and not enough movement today leaves me being sleepy and hyper at the same time. Hopefully my legs will calm down before I go to bed.
Got to the part where I've got to start writing again. Glad I didn't just throw most or all of it away as it really does have a lot of good places.....including my first ever good rendition of Kaylee. Imagine that. Who knows..might be able to work in that scene w/ jayne yet....
Ooookay...too much sugar and not enough movement today leaves me being sleepy and hyper at the same time. Hopefully my legs will calm down before I go to bed.