Oh YAY! I like this a lot. I like how you portray the weight of the fight without strictly telling us what it was about or about all the others before it. Because that's not the point.
Years in the abbey had taught Book how to submit, how to hide the color of the wolf that he has longed to kill. Lovely imagery here.
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Date: 2006-02-24 12:37 pm (UTC)Years in the abbey had taught Book how to submit, how to hide the color of the wolf that he has longed to kill.
Lovely imagery here.