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jebbypalWell okay...it was utterly not on my to-do list and I probably shouldn't have wasted 3 hrs doing it!! But I re-edited Ch6 Camo for the third time or so with the addition of beta#1's comments (thanks ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
shdwdrgn) --- which I really needed to cause the language needed soo much spiffing up. As always, amazed at how much non-essential junk remains after my first round of revision. Plus well, what was I thinking when I wrote for Kaylee?? Doh. Had her using super long sentences and way too many big words. I mean, yeah it's possible, but it just didn't feel like Kaylee in places...more like a hybrid of Inara/Kaylee. But then again, well, it's just hard to write the girl sandwiched between Zoe and Inara. Like writing Jayne in between Book and Inara. Tough.
But it's fixed and I managed to get the two scenes in that had been giving me fits for months!! So waiting on beta #2 before posting it:):):) It will be here soon....course maybe I should hold off on posting it until I manage to do something on Ch7 since it's not looking like I'm going to have huge amounts of free time to be writing fanfic in the near future.
*shrugs* But it's mostly done. And I'm feeling such a sense of accomplishment that I couldn't help taunting you all with it;) LOL.
*runs to hide*
ETA I can't believe I only have a little over 20,000 words for this and 46 pages. Seems like it should be oh so much more. Sigh.
shdwdrgn) --- which I really needed to cause the language needed soo much spiffing up. As always, amazed at how much non-essential junk remains after my first round of revision. Plus well, what was I thinking when I wrote for Kaylee?? Doh. Had her using super long sentences and way too many big words. I mean, yeah it's possible, but it just didn't feel like Kaylee in places...more like a hybrid of Inara/Kaylee. But then again, well, it's just hard to write the girl sandwiched between Zoe and Inara. Like writing Jayne in between Book and Inara. Tough.But it's fixed and I managed to get the two scenes in that had been giving me fits for months!! So waiting on beta #2 before posting it:):):) It will be here soon....course maybe I should hold off on posting it until I manage to do something on Ch7 since it's not looking like I'm going to have huge amounts of free time to be writing fanfic in the near future.
*shrugs* But it's mostly done. And I'm feeling such a sense of accomplishment that I couldn't help taunting you all with it;) LOL.
*runs to hide*
ETA I can't believe I only have a little over 20,000 words for this and 46 pages. Seems like it should be oh so much more. Sigh.
