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jebbypal ([personal profile] jebbypal) wrote2005-12-05 01:10 pm

weakness

Sooo...I came to a realization this weekend. I write like I read.

What do I mean by this? Well, you know all those wonderful descriptions that fantasy authors and the like pour into their books? Yeah, umm, well, at best I skim them. More likely I skip till the train of thought or dialogue picks up. Basically this stems from my very overly impatient personality and need to finish a story AS FAST AS POSSIBLE. No, I know, no one is going to steal the book from me. Moreover, I don't even have the excuse of avoiding library fines since I generally (ie always) buy my books. Yet, I still do it.

But this has definitely caused me a problem for writing. It's next to impossible for me to write descriptively. Oh, I can do it if I force myself...but it comes out stilted and then screws up my dialogue to no end. Twin Regrets has helped me a teeny tiny bit, but it's mostly exposed how hard it is for me to do and how I much prefer to just put down the pertinent points. But I realize that if I ever want to write a real novel in scifi or fantasy, well, that weakness is going to kill me before I start.

Sooo....have any of you guys had this problem? If you have, how'd you beat it? If you haven't, your ideas are welcome too.

And I realize that I don't always do this..when I beta, I do actually read everything, but it's painful for me to actually read a real novel like that. I just don't ENJOY it then. But not a lot of fanfic is strong on description either...

Anyways, those are my thoughts after finding my JOhn voice and getting another scene done since my antibody still hasn't come in.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_eb/ 2005-12-05 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm having trouble with this in my current fic. It's been so long since I've written anything that wasn't a script. I feel like I'm stepping on the actors' toes if I go into too much description of the character's emotional responses and I don't want to do the set designer's job cause I know they're sure to get snippy.