I've gotten decent w/ the introspective thoughts IMO....but the description..yeah, not so much. Which is probably just a symptom of me as well---I'm the person who will never be able to find the car in the parking lot unless I own it (and have for several years). I can't find my way back to places unless I drove there myself. And I just generally don't pay that much attention to the landscape etc. Especially not in "words". MOre of, oh gee, that's an interesting color of green.

And yeah, there is a balance. I just know I haven't reached the proper balance yet.

That medical/futuristic short you did was actually very well balanced IMO...but then again, I may not be the best judge:)