Dude (http://www.livejournal.com/users/docmichelle/161737.html). I am so very much like that. I have to struggle to figure out where to put in description and thinky thoughts in with the action and dialogue. I'm fine on introspective vignettes and stuff like that, but when I'm actually trying to have a plot happen? It drives me up a wall. And I do think there's a balance somewhere between a completely spare, script-like style and the really flowery stuff.

I just haven't figured out how to get there yet. But I've been working on figuring it out for the past six months. I have no advice yet, sorry. :(