Really enjoyable read, like how you spaced out the tale adding the now in with the then though it had me scowling because I really really wanted to know (I'm one of those impatient, turn to the end of book peopel lol. Seeing Simon's rescue of RIver through his eyes with all the bits leading in had me hooked from chapter to chapter but I like how you wound it all up at the end and had River sending her own message off in closing.

*hugs*